Comments of chapter undefined of Arpious of the Planes

OK so maybe the system thing is good and all but like it 6+ pages of most chapters. personally I don't even read the stats all that often. maybe if you just included new stats that she has gained. every now and then have a chapter representing all of her stats. the way this novel is going her stat page is gona cost 30 credits. it's not really a story more of an encyclopedia of what skills and bloodlines and blessings. the story is great just being bitchy