This chapter was f*****g stupid not only did you add ntr but you also f*****g added her getting pregnat and you did say it at the start was it suppose to be some kind of funny suprise because it ain’t funny at all.
only that? he died like that? since you say eye to eye, then make atleast the girl will be jealous to mc or came to love the mc again but the mc will not respond on it, this way the girl can also feel what the mc felt when he get ntr,
Don't worry, your not the only Author who make the MC get NTR-ed. There is several other and your plot is acceptable, except the part THE MC didn't get at least fight back and hurt the bastard more than giving him a **** you.