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Comments of chapter undefined of Tokyo Ghoul: Arkham

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Tokyo Ghoul: Arkham

ArkhamAsylum

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WinnieLePooh
WinnieLePoohLv13WinnieLePooh

Oh god why do these stories always make the girl into the pity party regretting their decisions everytime NTR happens

3yr
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ArkhamAsylum
ArkhamAsylumAuthorArkhamAsylum

Hello! Thank you for your comment. What I had on my mind was they were on a relationship for 5 years so the girl must have some emotional attachment to the mc. I can see where you are coming from and understand that I may have made a bad decision. I will try to improve myself. I appreciate your opinion and am sorry the story was not to your liking. Thank you for taking your time for reading my story.

3yr
snoobe18
snoobe18Lv4snoobe18

only that? he died like that? since you say eye to eye, then make atleast the girl will be jealous to mc or came to love the mc again but the mc will not respond on it, this way the girl can also feel what the mc felt when he get ntr,

3yr
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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

dont like ....NTR....but....like... no harem

3yr
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Kagami95
Kagami95Lv12Kagami95

This chapter was f*****g stupid not only did you add ntr but you also f*****g added her getting pregnat and you did say it at the start was it suppose to be some kind of funny suprise because it ain’t funny at all.

3yr
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NoHaremSectLeader
NoHaremSectLeaderLv10NoHaremSectLeader

suck a fat one you thot i hope you choke on it too

3yr
SlothElephant2k18
SlothElephant2k18Lv13SlothElephant2k18

Don't worry, your not the only Author who make the MC get NTR-ed. There is several other and your plot is acceptable, except the part THE MC didn't get at least fight back and hurt the bastard more than giving him a **** you.

3yr
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