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Tbe family part kinda feels like Desolate Era, which i liked but never finished Anyways, excited where this goes and plan to read as much as i can Im not sure how to check if this novel is still updating but im gonna read anyway
Lots of repeated words. Some just one sentece after the first use. Like you used look in one sentence and looking in next. But there are many more examples. Also, the dialogue felt almost purely informational. Fine to have, but there was no banter etc. Just, "those wolves are this rank while you have no cultivation.."" I have no cultvation so this is all i can do." Etc.