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Comments of chapter undefined of His Majesty's Devious Sins

OpheliaX
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Dorothy is a quack. Period. I don't want to hear her nonsense. My poor adeline's nightmare might've been her memories.

OpheliaX
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Well that's fine tho, if you like Lydia. But a Queen should be prim & proper, modest, elegant, eloquent, firm, & confident.. Adeline almost got all the qualities but she lacks eloquence & confidence. Lydia on the other hand is aggressive & confident.. Elias also is like that.. they won't get along well. Elias is a very strong character thus he needs someone for him to protect (weak), if his partner is a strong FL too then what is there for him to protect (where's the romance)? Adeline can work on it her short comings. We're still in the beginning of the novel, there will be a lot of character development. If Adeline is perfect in the beginning of the novel what's the purpose of the plot then?

BlaccLotus:I'm on Dorothy side here. she's just telling the prophecy. she wants the best for Elias. I see nothing good in him being with Adeline, and I prefer Lydia over the meek and weak Adeline. I hope Elias knows what's the best for him by choosing his fated golden rose over the weak little fawn. Lydia is better than Adeline, Lydia would be a better Queen than the meek Adeline. Period.
selenaaa
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I hope he doesn't go through with that punishment, Adeline will be so upset if she finds out

xo_angiie
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Love this

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Minx81
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Congratulations 🎈 on the contract!!! I was just thinking....is Asher human?🤔

Clotilda_Habong
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Adoris_Z
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Adoris_Z
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Congratulations! 🎊

agwx
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Congratulations!🥳🥳

_Athena_
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Bear808
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Hope he really double thinks about punishing Asher . But the story is developing wonderfully! 😁

Abasianam_Saturday
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Nylle
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Congratulation!!!🎉🎉🎉

Debbe_Phillips
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Well i think he should just let Asher be...she obviously chose him so...

mounty
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Congrats for contracts. 🎉 I curious did asher have other background beside become adeline guards. did asher never meet elias in the past when elias visited adeline?

Miriam_Smith_8085
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Aifei
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🎉🥳💐💐💐🥳🎉

priy17
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@Xin , any update regarding Infinite lifetimes with Mr. Lucifer . like when will you continue writing it.

warrior9
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is he a villain or what?

ethereal_Seraphim
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May I ask what is the contract all about?

BebyRose16
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congratulations, author🎊