Xincerely
this story is really good but.. I'm noticing inconsistencies.. such as the previous chapter saying her dress was ivory and this chapter saying it's green.. also the vampire she spent the night with implied they did more than just lay together when talking about her taste and such but in this chapter she said that's all they did (granted she was drunk and can't even remember his name) also they've mentioned she's frail and small but the way she described herself was sticking out like a sore thumb among all the other women so I'm not sure if she's extremely small and skinny or if she's more curvy
I don't like how Adeline is treated as a weak child and even Asher seems to not respect her and not care about what she gets through. Her aunt abuses her and he doesn't know? Really? But a man approaches her and suddenly he gets upset? Asher you are not a good bodyguard nor person, but yep certainly not her friend.