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Comments of chapter undefined of White Tiger (Lookism Fanfic)

STRO
STROAuthorSTRO

Damn, thank you for your feedback, it helped me a lot thankyou

God_Of_All
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I can see quite a few grammatical errors so do you need an editor? Add me on discord and I'll edit your existing and future chapters.

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NjalLeif
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If you read any other fan-fictions, then you probably noticed that the authors like to keep the story around 90% the same with their mc being involved and alternating the said events however they want to. So, you don't have to think too hard. This is a fan-fic and not an original novel which means you can take the main story and make it play through however you wish. You can also add new elements and arcs to the story when you get inspiration in the name of the butterfly effect. Because some minor and major changes are bound to happen. Anyway,cheers and keep up the good work.

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DARK_SAGE
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Keep going please 🤩

OverlordBGs
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Great chapter

M0N4RK
M0N4RKLv3M0N4RK

thnkx for the chapter

Anas_Ammar_4143
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Nice chapter

XIANJING
XIANJINGLv3XIANJING

Good

paz
pazLv2paz

that's good I was wondering what would happen to Eli. As always interesting 👍👍✨👍

LordKram
LordKramLv12LordKram

yeet

Muhammad_Rizky_0336
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Next min

RamenGuy
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Nice

TheCreatorOfRice
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Nice