dont mean to bully but I love the name powestones, even if it's a typo. sounds like a sick rock band that I wouldn't mind listening to. "hey bro have you listened to powestones newest album! it's so good!"
YOUR DOING GREAT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ALSO PLEASE MAKE the mc slightly psychotic, cuter lovable innocent, and short and make him use Anything else besides a sword, swords are overrated
this is a great storyline I just love when a down trodden kid gets what he wanted all his life I hope he gets some kind of revenge on Gerald I cannot stand bullying there is no room for it in any world