Comments of chapter undefined of My Hermes System

It's nice to see someone put real thought and calculations in their story, and characters! Thanks 👍😊

the pace is just right, like tea, you wouldn't want your tea too hot or too cold

nice flow just remember dont force anything pls

I think I will be back after stocking at least 10 chapters, it's not the speed is going but I just don't like how the things are now so far, for someone that carries a god name, even if they don't know, should at least have some of the Greek gods arrogance smh

When you do fiction math and still get it wrong XP

Bro I didn't come here to learn maths

the thing is, its his first time running at that speed and with so much factor like pain, emotional instability, fear or something that he could ran a little faster than it should be.. 😁

nice chapter

my only comaint so far is the misuse of gendered words at times. ie. using him/he when monologuing a woman. but that tends to be a common issue with english as a second language

Can someone Americanize it what’s the km in miles per hour

thanks for the chapter

this is really nice

so far the pace is kind of slow but this is the beginning and it seems like it's probably your first novel from the things you are saying so good start. love it

👍😁

i dont mind that maths

don't worry we won't.