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Gamer of the Dead

Hadi_Abdul_Hadi

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Yasar_Azimi
Yasar_AzimiLv4Yasar_Azimi

the story is ok, but the writing needs some work, the story has quite a few inconsistency and would appreciate if you could check what you are writing, then write it.

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Hadi_Abdul_Hadi
Hadi_Abdul_HadiAuthorHadi_Abdul_Hadi

okay, thanks for the advice.

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PuddingMaster
PuddingMasterLv14PuddingMaster

Use [......] if possible

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Lord_tabs
Lord_tabsLv1Lord_tabs

NOICE

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Kami12
Kami12Lv6Kami12

ThanksThanks

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Rasputin_01
Rasputin_01Lv1Rasputin_01

Reread what you have written it is really good so far but at times your sentences get confusing 👍

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Raiseraph
RaiseraphLv11Raiseraph

After all that training ,he still can't calm down.

2yr
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shahmohmmand
shahmohmmandLv1shahmohmmand

hi friend

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Hiro_Cortes
Hiro_CortesLv10Hiro_Cortes

I like

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