Comments of chapter undefined of The Secrets behind our breakup

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great story, keep up the good work!

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It’s really good, but you need an English editor to help you with syntax and formatting. Keep up the good work, author! 🥰

i thought this prologue kind of like the start of chapter one than a prologue, because there's dialogues there. some of prologue from books that i had read, it was a naration. but it's okay, all author have different kind of writing style~ 👍