Comments of chapter undefined of Mafia indebted

Dear author, i think you have done great job with the story. The development of the story and characters building are at a good paced. It felt so real And happy with the updates compare to any other novels. So keep writing and dont give up. readers takes time to find hidden treasures and appreciate story like this one. But still your study should be No 1. All the best in everything that you do. But whatever you decide to do, don’t leave things hanging and finish it, no matter how long it takes.

dear author, please do update and update fast. I've so hooked on your story that I've binged read the entire story in one day and I haven't even slept a wink the entire night just to read this book. please, don't stop updating .

While reading it, it felt so vivid and painful. I really hope this is not a true story, because my heart was breaking for the girl, and I hope that she will find a way to stop this monster. I really like this story, it is well written and unpredictable, but I cannot say that it was easy reading (totally not your typical romance). Please, author, continue, and let us know what happened to Anissa.

Gurl i just read all of these chapters in a week... thats how interesting this is. And I swear if you leave me on this cliffhanger I’m bouta feel very Unfullfilled.

What a page turner. You’re truly a great writer. I was on the edge of my seat reading this chaper and at times holding my breath 🤭 It was a happy moment to have Anissa smile and have a chance at freedom. I really hope her family is safe and that Zameer is fine. Im scared of who’s waiting in her room 😥 I just hope it’s not Shehryaar. I can’t wait for the next chapter 🤩🤗[img=update]

This is an amazing story, I truly hope you finish it!! It’s absolutely captivating and you have such a good writing style and are so discriptive!!

Your story is so creative and thought out. im honestly In love. I really hope you continue because i cant wait to see more!! 😍

OMG I can't believe you still didn't update yet so now I'm trying to finish the story the way I want it to end in my brain. But pls update cause I wanna read your end too!!!!!

your story is well written,,i can feel Anissa's struggle ,& as well as Sherryars i hope they have a good ending,,so please dear author continue writing this story

Well if thats how it ends ....What a waste

I love the story so much I hope she finds her way to make him suffer soon I can't wait anymore please more chapters

please continue your work...😉 i love the story coz i cant figure out what will happen next, i crave to read the next chapter im counting my hours left for me to sleep 😂😂

Dear author, please don't stop your update. Even if compared with other novel the number of reader isn't the same, the people who are reading your novel are very loyal . Keep going. Sorry if my english isn't correct, I'm french[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update].

Your story is really captivating..... I was so desperate to see Anissa to be happy.... Please keep updating..... Your cliffhanger had drove me crazy..... Please please please update as soon as possible.

👍🏻 not good at this kinda thing; its a good story only needs alittle bit of work on some very small editing things that are easily looked over. Not usually drawn to this genre, more into mystery, but its a great mystery as to what is the rivalery between the dead Twin. So yeah great storyline overall.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Ohh God

You always get my stomach churning with angst! Love it

What was she thinking did she really think that she could get away from him running to her parents house. I HAVE A LOT OF EMOTION READING THIS🤧🥺🤯😡🥊GRATE JOB AUTHOR