Would be nice to have a bit more description. Rather than just stating "it died", perhaps like "blood pulsed from its slashed throat with each heave of its belly until finally, its movement stopped."
Idk, English is not my first lang.
the problem I have with this novel is how are you going to just do 40 chapters and then quit it's like this book been out forever just waiting for the next chapter and it's like it's never going to come I hoping the author will read this and understand that he has a good audience here