MyLittleBrother
I love your story but man you ruin it with this filler chapters... I swear a person only needs to unlock 1 chapter out of 10 chapters to get a proper continuous flow to the story...just get creative man you are going to end up losing most of your following because nobody has the free passes to waste on chapters where the story has no progression at all... whether you take heed or not is up to you it's your story after all
H_Bondini isn't bring rude... it's just the plain truth... it's getting anoying to read a whole chapter that could have been reduced to a single paragraph...this comment section is meant for us readers to raise our opinions... and you can't call a person rude for just telling the truth... there was no I'll intension behind the words, just a word of advise to the author...
Flame_2682:Also, you realize there could be many reasons why they could be slowing down right? It could be lack of motivation (from people like you being rude when your getting to read for free), it could be writer's block, or there could be something going on irl thats causing the author to slow down.