MyLittleBrother
I love your story but man you ruin it with this filler chapters... I swear a person only needs to unlock 1 chapter out of 10 chapters to get a proper continuous flow to the story...just get creative man you are going to end up losing most of your following because nobody has the free passes to waste on chapters where the story has no progression at all... whether you take heed or not is up to you it's your story after all