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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto's Twin sister Hina

andrew_cowles
andrew_cowlesLv13andrew_cowles

It’s a good chapter but you use such short sentences. It’s reading more like a collection of statements than a chapter

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Daoist139082
Daoist139082Lv4Daoist139082

mc not have the ying Kurama, but that dosn't mean she can't get stronger. with her knowage can help Naruto study, become stronger than canon, make sure Naruto is treated fair. In canoni don't think Naruto or the supposed Ambu to protect him reported to Hiruzen the bad treatament he receive, when Naruto mention it the Hokage give him the flat with the monthly pocket money but don't do anything to the civilians that mistreat him or that deny Naruto to buy thing. The hokage don't give him the heritage of his parents by both money, techniques. Naruto as a clan heir normaly he will be taught by his clan member more so as an Hokage son and as a clan Head he had the right to partecipate/call clans head meeting but canon Naruto was to dumb to do and be helpfull in the meeting. Hope Hina use funjutsu, Flying thunder god, chakra chains

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gwenime
gwenimeLv3gwenime

ohh LOVE ITT

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cuddlypanda
cuddlypandaLv14cuddlypanda

Thanks for the chapter

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WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

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Zach50000
Zach50000Lv12Zach50000

Cool chapter so will being a aeronautical engineer will help her take full advantage over her bloodline and allow her to surpass anyone in fuinjutsu and wind/space techniques.

Destroyer3000
Destroyer3000Lv4Destroyer3000

This chapter, and future chapters assuming your writing style remained the same, uses the word "like" a lot. It's nothing too bad, but for improvement, some sentences can work without using the word.