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Comments of chapter undefined of Humanity's Campione

Classic_Balrog
Classic_BalrogLv12Classic_Balrog

Never saw the original, was this ‘Erica’ always pushy, or is the author just forcing the ship.

DanteMustDie
DanteMustDieAuthorDanteMustDie

I didnt even have her in the original, but in the source material she was pushy. IM not sure if ill include her as much as the source material, but if i do her being pushy will be addressed.

silentpassenger90
silentpassenger90Lv14silentpassenger90

I loved the original and I love the rewritten version. I like where this is going. Keep up the great work!

LordSatan666
LordSatan666Lv13LordSatan666

I very much like this version more and I like that Harry's a bit more mature in this version and the gods picked so far are perfect fits so far though we will need a death God for the hallows and I love the idea of a magic and craftsman God but maybe a God of creatures that would give harry pretty much all speak to talk to any animal

AlchemyBeast
AlchemyBeastLv5AlchemyBeast

Canaanite: Kothar Kothar-wa-Khasis is a Canaanite god whose name means "Skillful-and-Wise" or "Adroit-and-Perceptive" or "Deft-and-Clever". Another of his names means "Deft-with-both-hands". Kothar is smith, craftsman, engineer, architect, and inventor. He is also soothsayer and magician, creating sacred words and spells, in part because there is an association in many cultures of metalworking deities with magic. The god-name Ka-sha-lu in texts from Ebla suggests that he was known in Syria as early as the late third millennium BC.

0_Ancient_Daoist_0
0_Ancient_Daoist_0Lv40_Ancient_Daoist_0

like this version more

Freya519
Freya519Lv4Freya519

how often is it going to update?

Freya519
Freya519Lv4Freya519

how often is it going to update?

Amilcar_Rovelli_4103
Amilcar_Rovelli_4103Lv3Amilcar_Rovelli_4103

Se ve mucho mejor está versión de la historia

Seraphel
SeraphelLv5Seraphel

thanks for the great chapter cant wait for more

DoMiNiOn_2000
DoMiNiOn_2000Lv10DoMiNiOn_2000

Я думал, что у Гарри будет ещё один авторитет от Адама. Скажем, способность превращать вещи в золотые яблоки, которые можно съесть. Если это книга, то можно мгновенно её изучить. Если волшебный предмет или животное, то можно приобрести одно из его свойств. Или способность из собственных рёбер создавать своих клонов. Или он это получит от Евы, которая придёт мстить за Адама? Теперь Гарри осталось убить кого-то из этих богов, чтобы стать истинным повелителем смерти: Аид, Осирис, Анубис, Хела, Нергал, Эрешкигаль, Азраэль, Морриган, Миктлантекутли и другие боги. А ещё лучше прикончить какого-нибудь Бога Магии.

WhyNotBacon
WhyNotBaconLv13WhyNotBacon

This version is way better so far. Hope you don't drop it.

Times_Avatar
Times_AvatarLv3Times_Avatar

Keep Going And Thank's For The Chapter

Endless_Suffering
Endless_SufferingLv2Endless_Suffering

You don't use question marks and exclamation points at all.

Shurasik
ShurasikLv5Shurasik

Thanks for the chapter

selfinsert
selfinsertLv5selfinsert

chap please

Kelu
KeluLv14Kelu

thanks for the chapter, great job. I'm glad you didn't drop out the story. I was really enjoying the original, but I understand why the rewrite. I also loved the worlds you decided to include and Harry as the protagonist!

HermesTheGod
HermesTheGodLv4HermesTheGod

Love the rewrite

Peryite
PeryiteLv4Peryite

Are the updates going to be random or is there going to be a schedule?

_Spoiderman
_SpoidermanLv13_Spoiderman

thanks for the chapters relly liked the long chaps

Smol_Asian_Boi
Smol_Asian_BoiLv13Smol_Asian_Boi

This definitely better Keep uo the amazing work