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Comments of chapter undefined of Earth's Alpha Prime

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Earth's Alpha Prime

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thiesm92
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I honestly did not mind the "info-dump" it fleshes out the universe a lot more and I found it very interestingly written. I especially liked the fact that the monsters in the domes turned from faceless xp farms to something with more background and personality to it. So you should keep throwing these in from time to time.

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MN_1223
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Thanks for the feedback.

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Ozonelayer
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Yolo thxs for the chapteršŸ‘šŸ¾šŸ˜˜ However, one thing Iā€™m curious about is the system; is it sentient like a living creature or is it similar to a computer that is programmed to keep the universe in balance?

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mertlafy
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UnknownThief
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ty

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kweba
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thanks for the chapter

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Collapsed_Heaven
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thanks for the chapter

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Kambei_007
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ty

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Aswiftdeath
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Gg mate. Good so far. Keep up good work

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Jamesand4316
Jamesand4316Lv15Jamesand4316

As I read and discover the world you have created I find the occasional grammar errors, and misuse of words. The storyline is very good and easy to follow. You are not taking big jumps from timeliness or not staying with the character arc.

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Hxyxbd_Hdudbe_hd
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Been so slow idk even the person they talk abou ting

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