Comments of chapter undefined of Earth's Alpha Prime

Author thank you for this chapter. So far I'm enjoying your novel and there's nothing I don't like about it, there's just one small problem. The relationships. Kay is bound to hook up with Olivia and to even strengthen that relationship, you put in a lot of clues. For example: the fact that the little brother has a crush on her; that Jay scares her; Olivia's closest allies see her as either a sister or a leader worthy of admiration; and then to top it all off, there's a contract. And her clues, they started, like, 50 chapters ago. I don't care if her brother is a love interest, but it's not forced like that. It has to be natural. You're not going to do the same for the others, are you? I hope not!