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Comments of chapter undefined of Earth's Alpha Prime

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Unam
UnamLv3Unam

Thank you fo the Chapter. I love these type of Genres

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Sidarus94
Sidarus94Lv14Sidarus94

Starts off strong, it feels different. i think i like it.!!

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Espanol
EspanolLv4Espanol

The moment it said covid chills formed on my body. It fills like the prediction of end of 2021, hope not and good work man.

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CaptainBoyHole
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Comments encourage me too.

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GrumpyGuy
GrumpyGuyLv5GrumpyGuy

Good beggining, advice from me is to keep abriviation to the minimum. While PC is common term, “computer” is known to everyone, while PC to those using them regularly. Perhaps everyone in here is aware of it, it’s not guaranteed nor a good practice for a new writer. First use the whole word, then initialize else you are taking a risk.

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TurtleOfRainbow
TurtleOfRainbowLv14TurtleOfRainbow

I like this. He isn't stupid or overly smart. He realizes this is real, and preps himself. Very good intro, little detail, but generally informative

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Blek_Penther
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If you come from the future like my comment. :]

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MN_1223
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I am glad that you like it :)

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BrianGallacher7
BrianGallacher7Lv14BrianGallacher7

Brilliant beginning I hope no harem I hope mc is not too op

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Rhys_k
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ooh nice intro. have brought my hopes up.

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