Mujunel_the_Mystic
I miss the earlier chapters, the storyline more variative it got strugles about training or match, friendship, training like mad man and romance. The arc after he move to Juventus become boring, he bcome distant with his friend, agent and lover. Every chapter just focus on match and because he play in Juventus, everything just become much easier
At this point I'm getting really annoyed with MC. He is such a cardboard character. His only redeeming feature is that he has a system except that he is a bad friend and a very bad lover. He is the kind of guy you wouldn't wanna be friends with. I'm tired of this bs now I'll wait a few more chapters to see if he gets any character development after that I'll drop this.
If it wasnât for the matches being really well written, this story would be terrible. The system and its perks are the only other enjoyable thing in this story. The rest is bad imo, the dialogue is so flat that it makes every conversation feel like a slough to get through. The romance is also bad, in the beginning it was okay but now it just makes me dislike Zach. We keep persistently focusing on it for filler even though we know they will break up. It just makes him feel like a terrible person. He also sucks at being an actual friend, and heâs not that good to his agent either. I also wish that time went faster, more time skips and less focused games so we can actually reach the goals he sets for himself.