Comments of chapter undefined of THE GREATEST OF ALL TIME

It feels like everything emotional in this story is handled by a robot thats been given the task to maintain the current status quo. The romance is a waste of time. Why involve romance if you don’t want Zachary to care about his relationship? It’s not like you can use the excuse of it being his first relationship. It just seems like you messed up the emotional aspect of your MC in this story and I can’t tell if it was intentional or not. I’m done with this story for a good while.

2 months later Camilla calling... Camilla : I'm getting married Zachary : I see. I've got training I'll talk to you later.

Eh, hopefully there isn’t any dumb cheating story plot line for Camila. I’d hate to have to drop this story because of it.

I don't know why but i feel this is the calm before the storm especially that line "i am so happy to be a Juventus football player" that is a flag right there bro

Its not surprising that a breakup with Camille is on its way. They both have different priorities in life and usually act accordingly especially Zach. She by now especially after the miscarriage is reaching a final decision on their relationship, Zach is likely to feel bad for awhile but will get back in focusing on football pretty soon. He was not a bad boyfriend but a neglectful one. Hoping the break up will be smooth and there is no rebound especially with that girl/reporter who is a bit obssessed with him.

I’ve had a knot in my stomach about Camilla since the miscarriage. Zach has been a neglectful boyfriend, but he is not a bad one, just lacks communication skills. However, Camilla, who is older and is the one concerned about Zach’s lack of communication, goes on a trip with her mother without even sending a text or a call to Zachary. A trip where she would be unavailable except for Whatsapp. Now, maybe I’m reading to deeply into it, but this sounds like balogna. She can find a new guy, just break up with Zach and spare us the headache of having to read about her getting caught or Zach finding out. If any of y’all have ever been in a romantic relationship, then you understand that this situation is not normal. Unless she didn’t want him to find out at all. Again, a call or a text would have done fine. To Zach’s credit, he’s getting better, and is taking the relationship more seriously. Maybe the Emily’s initial worries were correct? Hopefully, the answer won’t make us want to throw our phones against the wall.

so far i see romance is useless in this novel, you didn't properly use it in the story. it feels like a robot , taking feelings and so on as if just data or a mission to complete. so if u can't write or use romance then just don't write or waste your time on it

honestly.. the romance was rushed af... first girl? yeah make her romancepartner right away>_> in other novels it works... here? not so much

Thanks 4z The Chapter~!✌