Comments of chapter undefined of THE GREATEST OF ALL TIME
THE GREATEST OF ALL TIME
Mujunel_the_Mystic
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look author i trust you i do. but i’m not sure where you’re going with this. are you trying to make the match seems close so it adds suspense? or make it once again zachary saves the day? because i sorta agree with the top comment. it makes zach’s team look useless given how many chances zach has given them to score yet they fail. it’s not even about having bad luck anymore since they keep doing it in every match. clearly the team is not ready and i would hate to see zach hard carrying a barely functioning team to win finals once again.
Either these keepers are on drugs or Zachary needs to leave, his back is gonna break soon from how much he is carrying, he makes chances more times than I blink in a day and yet they do nothing, he must realise he has to leave the club now, aint no excuse of wanting to play for a few years, if he knows whats right for him, he will leave, cos aint no man becoming the “Greatest Of All Time” when he is with a team like that, sorry for the rant but this is constructive critisism that should be taken into account, too many times have I seen an amazing save from the opposition that just shouldnt have happened, he had better join RB Leipzig where he can play with people like Werner who actually puts the goals in the net, honestly this league is wasting him away. Please take what ive said not as hate but something that should be adressed properly, thank you
THIS CHAPTER WAS SOME REAL GOOD WRITING! Doing the match from an outside point of view, adding the feelings from both girls and of course since they are watching it from tv, its not the same adrenaline rush as when we are next to zachary on the pitch, you can feel the distance to the action and the excitement in the girls. Awesome writing, make sure you do this again .
