Comments of chapter undefined of Highschool DxD: A new opportunity

He just say that u are lazy. No building up to the point where he can expose the secret. Instead, u just rushing to say it. Have u seen good isekai/ reincarnated fanfic? They never expose the secret as early as chapter 3. Heck, even anime did not do that. Its all about story building and immersion of the story, then u just kill it in front of reader. That why we piss. What is your intention of exposing it this early except for being lazy to build story development? Are u expecting by telling the secret, they gonna train u hard? Or hooking with the milf? There many way to do it, but u just go to easy route with cheat on. I hope u learn from this and not rush thing. Do a proper story development. I have good expectation on your story but this twist make u lost a star in my review. Its your story and all but as a reader, we have the right to give valid criticism.