Comments of chapter undefined of Demon of Fairy Tail (Reworked)
Demon of Fairy Tail (Reworked)
Edge_Lord_sama
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Edge_Lord_samaAuthorEdge_Lord_sama
Just tell me what I should change, and I'll think about it. This is my first time writing something like this.
Edge_Lord_samaAuthorEdge_Lord_sama
Ok ok, I got you. I'll try to make the next chapter around two thousand words ish. Maybe a little more or less.
Thiago_guedes:you have to write more ... as it is your first time, I thought it was good that you put "The God", not just any ROB, your level of description is good ... he saw his parents die in the front of him and soon after he died and went to visit god, who sent him to another world, with powers of blue flames .... and a tip, always place the characters of the worlds you will visit, as close as possible gives his personality original.image