Comments of chapter undefined of THAT DAY I BECAME A STAR
THAT DAY I BECAME A STAR
KevinMBEUTCHA
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We all wish he could but throughout the story i made mure to remind you guys through Cissa that this story isn't about being happy but about doing the right thing to save the most people. Even leaving children behind isn't something i initially wanted because some could say they were too young for that. In any case, you can trust me when I say that i had tears when writing the end of this story as well.
atleast more people didnt die....But i feel the story ended abruptly....what they actually did in the penultimate chapter was not told....how they got rid of the crystal.....Epilogue was awesome but the only part i didnt understand was what happened with that warm wind......idk if kevin alive or not....maybe he became a god and oversees them....maybe he is a spirit/soul who oversees them but why did genesis react then? also what's with excia? why she was finding kevin for 5 yrs? why kevin said excia is most mysterious one? so many questions unanswered..... I thought this novel would go beyond this world beyond the goddess of this world and gods of other worlds like dragons etc as there was mention of god council. I felt these things could be more developed Still the ending few chapters were good. Only thing I complain is that too much tragedy but without it the story would be incomplete.....Thanks for writing this story
