Alex_Clive
the first story, where the antagonist has way more plot armor than the MC. I am really getting annoyed with this. First, you have 20 chapters just about this fight, only for it to be completely pointless and without results. This can make the reader feel like they just wasted time. I will admit, it was a fun read, but all they hype turned into disappointment as soon as it ended.
how explain how tf is he still alive he shouldve ran out of chakra ages ago controlling the puppets and being connected to the gedo statue which was draining his life force his body would be in no shape to fight both mentally or physically plus being hit by the golden wheel reincarnation explosion technique should obliterated his body if not his wound would've been cauterized completed stopping blood flow. This is total bull