Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan

aren't you translating it ??? bro if it's coincidence it is a super dop coincidence it. but after I have read your fin fic I tried to search it up on the internet and I found one and I stared reading it even though the world's were messed up it was understandable and I am now again again reading the proper translated version or I thought so. don't tell me it was written by the future you, wait am I in future or past.

Itachi had a strangely strong will at a young age, you could make it so that he has to fight against his inner-self(smth like naruto, but change it up a bit), and after winning he affirms himself and becomes canon itachi(mentally).

I think you should stick to the original and just change some things here and there, no need to create yours when you don't have a concrete idea on what you're looking for.

Totsuka sword is a soul sword maybe he should be tested by will of power he will fall into a genjutsu that he will lose everything again and again if he is not give up yet he will be rewarded by totsuka blade

Do a treasure hunt maybe! Competition! Perhaps a lost shrine of sorts... ? A clue maybe, and he chases after it. Maybe it's like a painting in the Uchiha shrine he finds intriguing, or maybe it's a test from the animal sages.

so I assume the translation does not have a story arc for itachi totsuka sword. first, how many original chapter are you planning to write whether itachi is worthy of the sword or not? 3-5? secondly does e really need the trial? for me personally, someone who hate everything that has "Uciha" attached to their name, dont think its necessary whatsoever. lastly, if you plan on sticking to write a mini original arc for itachi, something along the line of testing one spirit, like resisting corrupted by his own power.

You are translated it?)

no

If you want an idea for a good few chapters make itachi a part of the anbu( if he isnt i forgot if he is lol) then make him and his team go on a mission to go after the Akatsuki dressed as Amatsukami And for itachi to stumble or fall into a cave with a trial and stuff for the sword after a dire condition wheRe he almost loses his life. this Is a rough idea not well thought out but yea its a start

just go with something cliche like journey to the west.

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hmmmm well why not just like Fugaku mangekyo sharingan, which side will he choose. Don't forget Totsuka Blade have sealing properties (Orochimaru) so that mean it has some sort of interpretation that somehow connect to Sasuke, maybe (Sasuke's bow manifest when he is hunting Danzo just like when he is hunting boar with Itachi) and since itachi decided to SEAL the truth of him from Sasuke (and from other people too i guess) that's why he got the Totsuka Blade, giving Itachi not what he want but something that he need, a powerful sword and a impenetrable shield (The Yata Mirror) so yeah guess that's it. and i just want to ask a question, is it just me or Itachi is basically Hagoromo