Dao_Of_Fiction
Dear author I really like your story, you're great. But the MC need to be less soft, I don't want a arrogant one but every man need to have pride and a lord need to be imposing. More charism and les underestimated MC, too annoying. Thank you very much.
A lord hunting for rats, really? Quite odd for a lord of the place to be given and doing menial labor, excuse me, âquestsâ from his own people in his own town. Are there no administration level quests related to him being a lord? Thereâs more but maybe itâll be answered in later chaps. Otherwise, I like it so far~