Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter and The Alchemist list

To be honest I like the current process of the storie, if you can always upload as much as you do know I would like the details to stay the same Great story

more story and could you explain the system part more clearly. like with an interface or if that's not possible then like something else

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Its been great so far but a little bit of acceleration of plot is needed so you could write one detail focused chapter and another plot focused one for the next chapter !!!But its not a major problem !!!

continue current system.

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I like the current way you are writing.

I prefer the current system but i think you can lessen the detail so that one chapter will not only talk about world background or situation

bro you really believe that this story belongs to you and make changes. wow, you are just copying the story from other novel and claiming to adjust the story as if its your work. really have no shame bro

more story, if you could make the overly chinese proverbs and phrase more western ones that would be better. For example western novel rarely used the phrase 'easy to bully' but more 'easy to take advantage of'. I know it's kinda mouthful.

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The current system looks good.

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continue as it is no need to change any thing

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