Comments of chapter undefined of Chosen by Fate, Rejected by the Alpha

I was wondering if instead of completely repeating the scene, you could maybe start where it ended previously and use that to tell the other side. it is irritat6to feelblike i am reading the exact same thing twice

Reese quit worrying about Carter. You are Trinity’s Mate, act like one will you?! Give Trinity more reasons to hug you.

Breaking down walls...what’s next???

I love that they are finally being nice to each other.

Cant wait to find out trinities background father story

yey! Trinity is finally warming up to Reece!!!

same here

Reece is jealous 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣OMG 😹😹😹😹😹

ooo are things about to change for them?

Man he’s dumb she only needs you

baby steps I suppose. Having to write all those Finals in one day is going to suck horribly

when are they going to get together and love each other so they can work together and yes I agree that you should stop repeating the chapter let the book have a ending and not going real long it is better to have a sequel

Nedd moreeee !!

😍🥰

😊

Good revelation on Reece part and she didn’t pick a fight

i like seeing the scene from both perspectives, but maybe rather than print in all the exact dialogue, you could summarize it and focus more on what's going on internally with them and their perception of the other? like here, Reece could have just summarized, 'she was apparently grateful that I'd arranged her exams, but all I could do was try to keep Rex calm and try to figure out if i could hug her. I responded as coolly as possible while trying to understand what was going on...." something to that effect, song with all the wonderful details about Rex panting and trying to cage him, lol, and Little Bunny seemed so different. all that is great to read👍

Aw hugs