Comments of chapter undefined of My Atypical Wolf (BL)

Matt is definitely alive buh pliz don't kill him...l like his tough nature.😊

What if his gf is a witch 😭

matt dead...

From searching for Matt to Caleb being in trouble. please spare us to suspense a bit. Don't kill Matt, what will Caleb do??

I think he is in heat too often.

This is what I mean about there being a lack of logical progression. He calls his brother before getting out of the car when a tree fell... but doesn't bother to call him here. There's absolutely no logic to it. It's very awkwardly contorted to create a situation for Caleb to be abducted, and ends up coming across as disjointed ooc patching. If he tried to get hold of his brother and couldn't, that might work, but not even trying? I suppose you could go with the assumption that being in heat caused his brain to die, and his body is just running on mindless nerve impulses. That's the only explanation I can come up with. Logical progression of events creates a solid, engaging foundation for a good story. All of that is lacking here.