Comments of chapter undefined of Tales of Hiroki: A Naruto Story

Author, please edits the age of Kushina to 12-13 because in the 2nd WNW Minato is a Genin with 12-13 years old because the pause of the 2nd WNW to the 3rd WNW is just 5 years. the end of the 3rd WNW Minato has 22-23 years old became 4th Hokage with 23 years old and died with 24 years old

well it doesn't matter much to me how you put the events happening in anime into your fan fic ( the timeline) , cause it's a fan fic it doesn't have to strictly follow the anime. But the thing bothered me is how much forced the conversation between mc and sakumo feels , I just hope that you make it in a much better flow . other than that everything is fine.

am I the only who thought that this is cliche

ninja academy starts at age of 5, not 8...PEACE

Minato and Kushina is 10 years older than Kakashi...when they died Kakashi has 14 years old, Minato and Kushina 24 years old...to help you make lass mistakes in the timeline read this "Naruto Ultimate Timeline" https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/User:Seelentau/Naruto_Timeline

i think he should develop his own space time ninjutsu not just flying thunder god....its better if its like nightcrawler but with long distance too......copying flying thunder god is overused.....also i don't think minato already developed that he is 15 years old....even rasengan took him 3+ years....20+ years is more accurate

I hope the mc was acting this chapter... Can't be saving every fictional character just because you like them.

So MC's whole purpose in the naruto world is to save people?

This seems so...unrealistic, but its cool

minato doesn't work for me......

kenapa lo repot2 selametin tu orang apa hidup lo kagak penting jangan naif mau selametin semua orang mending lo hidup dg damai gausah ngaco selametin orang baka

Keep it up 👍

Nice

MC has a partner or not? Or Harem?Isn't it possible that the MC is just a passer-by and only cares about other people?

You do relise that sakumo was blamed for starting the 3rd ninja war because he failed that mission but your puting it at the end the the 2nd it makes no sense