LeeMaRi1999
I will start from the beginning :) I have an "alergy" for CEO. When I see CEO daddy, CEO mummy, etc... I don't feel like reading at all... I know many of my friends have the same "disease". I was in some way prejudiced against your story before I started reading it ;) I had a surprise. I was expecting a boring Korean romance, and here is a fairy-tale story. I love the mixture of fairy tales, fairies, mermaids, etc... mix with your sense of humor. You don't struggle, like most of us, with tenses, style or grammar so it's a plesure to read. I don't like the excerpt in synopsis. Synopsis should be synopsis, it's souldn't have too much information, it's just an outline of the plot of the book... think about it ;) Some of the chapters titles are too long. from the theoretician's point of view, it should have 1-3 words to be good. Long titles looks strange for European, or American reader ;)