i love your vivid descriptions. i can definitely see the story unfold in my minds eye. love how you mentioned the red hair againzt the snow and the intensity of the inner turmoil alpha is facing. looling forward to more reading !
Glad he didn't kill the baby polar bear. Instead he saved it and tended to it's wound. I take the vampires he found dead were probably the one's the queen/step-mother ordered to her and bring back her head. Looks like both of them will deny the mate bond since they are sworn enemies.
I think the book needs an editor and a proofreader. So much potential but needs a lot of improvement on grammar and sentence structures— not to mention the typos.
