TruePlug
It’s kinda going too fast even for a hentai/smut story. Maybe try writing/extending the chapter about the next girls to like 2-4 chspters. Other than that, interesting story....
I don't know why but the web site's reader view does not like picking up everything, and it's not just this novel. Several times I have had to have a different tab open while I had reader view going, usually it's just stats it leads off but sometimes like just now it reads a partial list of things, ex. reader view doesn't show he can buy rope or a whip. Just curious, does anyone know anything about this?