It's cool and all but where's the story? All I've seen so far are explanations of what he's created. Nothings really happened. Besides MC and his family I don't think more than 5 other characters has even spoken.
No SHIELD? No HYDRA? Even the Sorcerer Supreme didn’t come to him? There's no way they don’t know about him afterall. The Living Tribunal may not care, but the SS surely does.
Constantly repeating the same information is getting annoying. How many times do we need to know a Cosmic Cubes power is impermanent? Or that the MC is worried about the LT, we got it after the first time, no need to keep harping the same details.
Well Author-san I don't know whether this is a reboot or rewrite of your story 'Marvel: White' but it is good. You've improved your writing skill, kudos
What do you mean by "artificial non-artificial heart"? The word artificial just means that it was made by humans or that it didn't happen randomly in nature. Do you mean that the heart is organic?
Umm... i get what you tried to do but, the advantage of the symbiote was copying powers, how would it copy them know if you can’t control it outside your body to analyze someone else…