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Comments of chapter undefined of Instant Mastery In Harry Potter (English)

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shadowgodking
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Thank

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Shadewind
ShadewindLv6Shadewind

I kinda hope he dont help them . And i am kinda disappointed in his granddaughter . Why doed she fall for james .. and her attitude towards mc isnt that good. Form her attitude i can say that she can destroy her family for her love for james is greater. And she knows that her grandfather clearly don't like the potters but she still falls for that james . I dont really like this if mc have this kind of descendent then he should just left them to thier own as he already gave them all the knowledge and resource . I don't know why you made this kind of plot but i really dont like this granddaughter. Sorry for ranting sigh but the story is good keep up the good work.

Klaudia_Oditz
Klaudia_OditzLv4Klaudia_Oditz

i don't like his grandaughter, ich hope heute does not help them, he should send them back, maybe give a beating to ron and Harry;)

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salmanrishi
salmanrishiLv5salmanrishi

A suggestion if you will... Don't tell pov of others after an event and repeat that event again in the story, instead try to input that pov during that event. Good Work... keep it up :)

Solarious
SolariousLv5Solarious

would be funny if hermione fell for him lol

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BloodySapphire
BloodySapphireLv15BloodySapphire

yay!!!!

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Phil_Morris
Phil_MorrisLv4Phil_Morris

thanks for the chapter

Puzzle1231
Puzzle1231Lv5Puzzle1231

Exp