Comments of chapter undefined of Instant Mastery In Harry Potter (English)

he/she mixups

Thank You For The Chapter Mr Author 😜 A Fantastic Chapter As Always 😉

His* not her when you are talking about the male mc. Thanks for the chapter

Thanks

Hopefully he doesn’t end up with bella she just to crazy tbh!?!?

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C'mon man how can you mix up a he with a she what gender are you, ANSWER ME!!! c'mon man oh can do better its a great plot just the pronouns please fix them

Ughhhhhh, why author why, why is it so hard to differentiate between a he and a she!! This is triggering me so much lol. Also, lots of grammar mistakes and sentences that makes no sense. I hope you improve.

I am disappointed in you author, already three chapters in and your already simping, shame on you...

how much time has passed ... you could have already corrected the errors indicated :(

now impossible to read: (it used to be better

I prefer the other version of the story it actually sounded like Harry potter world language when I read it but now its just meh p.s author you shouldnt write this story how the readers tell you to this is your story

Well in the 2nd paragraph before the last where bella is thinking about her beauty there are some grammar errors. Those errors were in the previous version as well. Good story Keep it up!

is the mc a boy or girl? or what? ima start calling ur mc a gender confused "it"...

Thanks for the amazing chapters!

hEr?

I just can't...

omg when I read what bellatrix thinks about herself i want to drop the fanfic.there are so many issues with the fanfic like unessecary words in sentances like red flu and ancestral plus labels.

Solo para que lo sepas: El - he, ella - she Su - his/her, dependiente de que sea de un hombre o una mujer Cada vez que leo alguien hacer este error, ya mi sentimiento para la novella se baja bastantemente.