Comments of chapter undefined of CEO AND I

The chapter is awesome author 😍 And I love how the FL is an ARMY 💜💜💯

I hate to make a negative comment after such nice reviews but I am finding the GRAMMAR and CONVERSATIONS a bit disjointed. The grammar is definitely an issue and the conversations lack depth/substance (in other words, they seem flat and shallow) 😬 Sorry, I know that sounds harsh but as a writer…you have to be willing to receive the good with the bad and add or take away as needed. Food for thought as you continue your writing career….Happy writing ✍🏾

that whole song was unnecessary. it didnt add to anything but the the word count. otherwise nice start to the story :)

good one

Heey

Hahaha you’re cute ! I Could relate with you . Cool

The chapter's great Tho I though I was in a music class

purple you💜💜

ARMY 💜💜💜

ARMY 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

lam also big fan of BTS . especially dynamite song and bloody sweat tears

sounds like partying and bf hunting lol