Krizantem
how's the MC able to last for hours and then training using the or shroud technique when the original MCS during their beginning could not last even one whole hour especially when there Talent like one in 10 million. are you trying to say that not only is your MC more talented than the original MCS but he also has a larger Mana pool then them at the beginning of their training.
HxH was systematic logic, very imaginary but complicated of course the most interesting manga~~~ for author if you has limited logic and creativity please make mc with enchanter, transmutter or emitter, this 3 type don't play with BS (easy to explain almost fair play nen amount ≈ causality effect)... don't destroy your startup stories with smartass vows, rubbish limitations and idiotic risks... simple da best~