Goddess-Of-Dawn
paying for extra chapters that are all over the place. stopped reading at chapter 29mm annoying to try to follow along
The chapters seem all out of order... makes following the story difficult and jarring. Too bad. The story has potential.
Well thAt wasnt weird at all
The chapters repeating and missing chapters is ruining this beautiful story. Please fix this as I really enjoy this story and your writing.
chapters are out of order đ
