Comments of chapter undefined of Olivia Milan - A Bad Girl Story

I like the drive of the story and the way that it's set out but I wonder if you could improve the transitions between perspectives. The perspective changes in the story were very confusing to me. I also was wondering if you would consider putting the ending part towards when you begin telling the story, so as to give a slight bit of context before the story has begun and to give it a little bit more comprehensibility. Other than these points I can really see this story going somewhere, it looks really good and the connection with the mc is established very early on, which I like. Good work!