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Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn in Naruto as Naruto's twin brother (dropped)

Na1gel
Na1gelLv4Na1gel

so as his big brother he don't think its kinda time to sit Narutos ass down and explain some shit ? like birds and bees and why the **** people don't take him srsly and shit like that ? if he change his attire he will not really get any better response from people but they will not look constipated every time they have to look at his ninja cloths . maybe talk to him that girls don't like idiots so maybe read abit more ? maybe talk about him how loud he is ? these kind of things is kind of the things a family member would nip at the bud and not let it grow and fester honestly as a big brother he kinda sucks balls ...

Neminem_Umbra
Neminem_UmbraAuthorNeminem_Umbra

I thought it would be symbolic that naruto wears orange as it is the combination of red and yellow. I but I'll try and change it in the future.

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Ansura
AnsuraLv5Ansura

he shouldn't spout future knowledge like that if obito or even zetsu get even a hint of a guy making such accurate predictions obito wouldnt hesitate to immediately kidnap menma and extract kurama, as a jinchuriki he should always expect to be watched 24/7 from zetsu cause most probably either zetsu or his clones would always be watching and collecting info

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nick_maynard
nick_maynardLv13nick_maynard

There's only 2 big things to keep in mind when changing things 1 it needs to make sense on some level or something will go wrong usually sooner than later 2 while changing everything at once is bad idea usually doing it in stages will make it easier to change everything while avoiding " issues "

LiaFeil
LiaFeilLv4LiaFeil

Just to remember you, at the end of the series, Naruto has all the parts of the Kyuubi. So, Author-san, please find a way so that the two brothers can have every part of the kyuubi in their bodies ... Maybe ... you can extract it from Menma's body in another alternative world?

Leandro_Silva_4268
Leandro_Silva_4268Lv4Leandro_Silva_4268

The 4 mizukage died long before Naruto became a ninja from what I remember there was even that guy who used Zabuza's sword that was from the mist and died for the 4 mizukage after Itachi killed the 4 mizukage with the amaterasu

darkcat
darkcatLv4darkcat

thanks for the chapter

Phil_Morris
Phil_MorrisLv4Phil_Morris

thanks for the chapter

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

QuickSilver
QuickSilverLv12QuickSilver

cant vote. it says your novel doesnt support power stone.