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Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn in Naruto as Naruto's twin brother (dropped)

Fanfiction_Fanatic
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He can use body flicker at just four years old even though his body hasn't developed the proper muscles to do it. If this turns out to be one of those fanfictions where the MC is still a child but can go toe-to-toe with the strongest beings on the planet then I'm dropping it.

Neminem_Umbra
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Body Flicker does not rely on the muscles as is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalize the body and move at extreme speeds.

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Clown_Of_God
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Author, remember to edit the times to 4 years because the ninja academy starts at age of 4, not 5

Clown_Of_God
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the Same hair of Minato with red color and violet eyes of Kushina

Infinitenull
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Does he have the other half of the nine-tails? Cuz if he doesnt that wouldnt make any sense man

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ASMODEUS
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Até que enfim um irmão gêmeo com esse nome

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White_Clown
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who's older?

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Beliel
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Hello there Although the chapter left me waiting for more, it was entertaining to read it The death of Kushima and Minato could have expressed some more emotion I like how you chose the name of the protagonist taking as a reference the story of one of the movies Although later I would not like to see how Menmma becomes an antagonist Anyway thanks for the chapter

Pimple_Face_13
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The later half of the chapter felt kinda rushed and skimmed over.

Kido_TO
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In my view what you said about doesn't make any point was a disrespect to author as you questioned if he doesn't give other half to kurama..Since if that were to be the case, the point maker was author itself so you indirectly said it doesn't make sense to him. And thus I said please respect author bro. It wasn't a defense or offense to neither u or author. Chill.

Kido_TO
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awesome start of this fanfic Author San...I hope he has other elements affinity as well other than sensor type chakra.

WolfLord
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Thanks for the chapter on a good story

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MohamedRost
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