Brendanjoke
Not gonna lie, I was a bit concerned for mc and Ash. Deeply concerned, and worried. Yet I love the feeling, because to worried or anxious for w character is the mark of a good writer. No, not good. Great even. This is beautifully and painstakingly done and I wanna thank you for coming up with the idea. I look forward to reading more, because this is awesome. I am sure mc will face more troubles in the future, but I am glad that the guillotine over his head(debt) has been removed, now he can focus on his life. I feel that you as thr author
Its good story but i don't like the MC. He's Naive, Stupid, Coward and very Annoying! Another point is; he should've made Ash kill the man! allowing the man to leave after witnessing Ash's strength will only give him more trouble! Originally, i thought it was an interesting story but this chapter ruin it.