Comments of chapter undefined of The Vampire's Love: You Are My Destiny

I'm a new reader to your story it is a such good story congrats but I have this only one concern I literally don't like the flow of the story right now because of these mysterious dreams or events and mysterious people coming to Laura I can't even know if it is luke or not it really suck me up cause I'm also a writer I have already determine where this story should end sweet I'm giving you advice Laura should meet this vampire and marry her after that there might be the battle between the luke and another vampire of another kingdom who might come liking Laura not only that also this conflict should intervene with human kind , witches or demon and stuff like that . the story is beautiful but some scenes are not giving me goosebumps