Lizabelle88
she is a good woman. so happy to see that she won't trick the vampires and sacrifice lots of human lives. the chapters are a bit wordy, you could say the same thing in less words or chapters so the characters can move forward.. that is a matter of practice with succinct writing or an editor or beta reader to help.
đ€ I wonder if her parents will put her in a drugged sleep and smuggle her out anyway. I like the story thus far. Understanding a bit about our characters and their situation gives me more appreciation to what kind of person they are and how the story will play out. Good job author! Ya got me hooked in. đ