Comments of chapter undefined of Avatar The Last Airbender: Cold Paths
Avatar The Last Airbender: Cold Paths
CORNBRINGER
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... The nameless and Faceless does make sense, He came from our universe, with our rules, so he would have to give up anything that connects him to our universe, that includes his name and face, well expect his memories.
The other povs were more than half of the chapter. I can understand Iroh's one since we never knew much of how he thought, he's cool. But Toph's? She is one of the main characters, we know her for around half of canon series, OF COURSE we know what she thought of her family and how useless they made her feel, so why is it being repeated and taking so much space in the chapter? I really like this fanfic, but there is so much filler. If Toph's part is actually important i would write it like: "Meanwhile, in Earth Kingdom, a blind girl was growing more and more frustrated with her family" or something like that. It's short, says everything in that pov, you don't actually need another pov, and you don't even have to mention her name because readers are not st*pid and we know who is this about. I feel like i'm only going to read Akira's povs and glance at the other ones since they are not interesting. They feel as if the author is trying to make chapters longer when it's a fanfic -it's rare when fanfics have long chapters- i don't think people would mind having shorter chapters as long as the plot is moving without fillers.
