Comments of chapter undefined of Avatar The Last Airbender: Cold Paths
Avatar The Last Airbender: Cold Paths
CORNBRINGER
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umm ... MB I'm just spoiled but tbh from the hype and the fact u making momey off this i expected better. Many weird (but small) grammar mistakes and quite a few times when it seems comedy was used to cover up a leap in logic (ex: he gets a "scratch", passes out - doesnt seem like a scratch)(ex: closes his eyes when punching even tho he is "going down fighting" and has tons of martial experience). The plot is good, and the memes are fresh but the devil is in the details and that's where you are struggling my friend
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CORNBRINGER
Hoping for Toph Beifong, would be wrong for him and Katara in my opinion. Any girl that ended single in the story is fair game, and Toph is the coolest girl there is. Azula would be nice, like she has atitude problems, but in the begining of the series she was just a sexy bad*ss girl that just wanted recognition, at the end of the series she was a lost cause.
